Okay, well, you've already got my opinion on your Aussie man, here, so now my opinion on the rest of the piece.

One: I love Elliot. The writer's are pretty horrible to him, really. I mean, Olivia has her brother, but other than that... But Elliot. They're just evil.

And, you know, I can see this happening. Elliot and his punching bag, then his punching partner. The fact that Elliot made a friend is kind of cute, too.

And that he pretty much aligned Kathy with the dingo.

"'But you were close.'"

Hehe. That slipped past me the first time I read this piece. I never liked Kathy. The kids were cute, but Kathy was always just an annoyance.

Oh, and has she actually left yet? Because - as uasual - we're like a year and a half behind.

Again, awesome story, and poor Elliot.

Giorgia

Tis good. :)

I've never read a Law and Order fanfic before but I'm a huge fan so it's not hard for me to follow. It's one of the few "branch out" fandoms that I know really really well.

You've got Elliot to a T. Though... I'm sad that he's sad. He doesn't deserve it.

It's a good piece. :)

Excellent Job! I can see Elliott doing exactly this. Please update soon, Riley sounds like an interesting guy.