aww this was brilliant! I loved it.
it really was remarkable. you have a very very good writing style!

this was such a good story. i hope you know this was like the best ever- you put so much emotion in it and like. i could see it, like picture everything. ( i even cried) well i hope you write another chapter even if this was like a 1-shot you should write another chapter or something this is like amazing. and i really hope that you write more. if you can.

This was interesting, you seem to be able to express emotions, you may have never felt. That in itself is amazing.

wow.
this is deep.
i've always like leah a little bit in my heart and just not known it. but it's so good! but so angsty! and depressing. and a cliff hanger in every sense of the word!
i agreeand say you should make a leah fic.

I've always thought that Leah was a great character, but that was wonderful. Great job.

fate can go feed it's self to sharks. fate is way unfair. i can so get where Leah is comin from. Suicide sucks for everyone involved though. she loses her life, seth loses a sister, sam gets to feel guilty for the rest of eternity... yikes.

SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED SHE JUMPED

You know, I always wanted to do that. I get some people who do it and just felt like being a joiner, but I am completely over that now!

My eyes starter to water and all I was doing was pasting. I don't know how they do it. I think my head nearly feel off.

But to the point here cause you know I'll prattle 'til I'm eighty...like now. So...

I loved loved loved it. It was so dark and angsty and just all kinds of...no. Not really, but I did love it. Na d it had just the right amount of angst and darkness to really seem like Leahs thoughts.

Okay, see now it's time to go was dishes and go to bed. I'm way past loopy now.

Char

loved it? are you kidding it was amazing

it made me like cry dude. you rock. i know this is a little rude but do you think you could write another leah fic, but where their is a happily ever after.

you don't have to but you are an fantastic writer and it would be a nice addition to the world

amazing amazing amazing

Loved it. I stayed up late last night reading "Then Came Rayne" because I couldn't stand not knowing what was going to happen. I always felt bad for Leah too, I think every girl who's ever been in a situation like that can relate to her. I loved how you wrote her feelings in the one shot. I hate one shots though cuz it always has me wanting more. Did Leah jump? Or didn't she? What's your next project? I would love to see how you do a Quil and Claire story. Keep up the great work!

love it, great job, leah is always shown as the jerk, so yay u.

This is really good. I think you should continue the story. Maybe someone saves her... hot guy? Hahah she moves on with her life. Something to make Leah have a happy ending. After all, she deserves one.


But Anyways, this was really great writing. And I hope you keep going.

update please

aw
this is such an angst-y and emotional fan fiction i have ever read about leah!
i always loved fan fictions about leah
can't wait for the next chapter if there is one!

please say you will continue. i love the intensity of your words and how they related to the events in leah's life. I also loved how she is just one step away waiting. do hope you continue... even if she jumps or steps back just would like to know where you would think leah would go.