|Reviews for Breaking Dawn the Musical|
| xEmmaxSophiex 12/18/09 . chapter 5
it's really funny!
| Lulu Lollipop 3/4/09 . chapter 4
i would love 2 adopt the story if u would be my betta reader?
| pearberry14 11/24/08 . chapter 3
| Trina Mason 11/14/08 . chapter 2
I enjoyed that WAY better. Thanks for the URL to the song. I'm a big silly songs fan, and I've heard the song before, but I wouldn't have been able to conjure it up in my head alone.
| pearberry14 11/13/08 . chapter 2
| KCCullen722 11/13/08 . chapter 2
| Lulu Lollipop 11/13/08 . chapter 2
| Guest 11/13/08 . chapter 2
I like it, but can you make the chapters longer? maybe explain what bella is seeing, where she is, the backstory, etc. i know what is going on due to your summary, but if i hadn't read it, i probably wouldn't understand at all. i also agree with the other person, music would be nice! i know that is hard for us who aren't composers, (i can't compose a note to save my life, so if you can't, i wont be mad) but it might add a bit more depth. funny concept, though! keep it up, can't wait to read more.
| Trina Mason 11/12/08 . chapter 1
I think it would be better if I had a song in my head to go with it...something silly like Bohemian Rapsody by Queen.