Sweeeeeet!

I was listening to She is the Sunlight by Trading Yesterday while reading this. It suprisingly fit, and made me feel like I, too, was falling.

This had light-hearted romance and humor, which added all the more to the theme of falling.

I loved the dialogue, as weird as that may sound.

you're a very talented writer.

the metaphor was done nicely I can almost feel the emotions

you're amazing :)

Falling... being free is very hard.

So many rules!

Hm. Not entirely sure I get what you're going at, but the prose is certainly lovely, and I'm always a fan of independent!Sakura and protective!Sasuke.

Oh wow. I really liked it.

It was different from the things I've been reading which probably made it all the more amazing.

Great job.

-N

There is a song that goes with this, Let Me Fall by Cirque du Soleil off the Quidam album. I highly recommend it.

I liked this, yes I thought she was kind of suicidal but she's too strong to be so. So the subtly was harder to see than it should have been. But pretty none the less.

This is... oh, I dunno. It somewhat reminded me of the quote "It's so easy to fall in love but hard to find someone who will catch you." Well, yeah. He caught her.

Maybe just a tad bit with the metaphor...

I suppose, in the Naruto fandom, this could apply to Neji/Ten, in sense, or...well, it would require the guys who are actually silent enough to not seem like they're doing anything and then just appear out of nowhere, like a ghost.

So the angsty ones, Neji, Sasuke, Gaara, and Itachi fit it. The girl can be whoever. -

(Not Hinata. Definitely not Hinata.)

- It is adorable, though. Not fluffy either, which is a bonus.

Not bad..

I don't think so. It sounds similar to a fan fic I wrote too about Sakura. She isn't suicidal, she just loves the feeling of freedom that comes with falling because it's the closest thing to flying. (At least coming from the perspective of someone who wants to fly but never will be able to.) Very well done. I love it that Sasuke keeps her from falling though.

somehow i read this and think of it as one of the fics taht make the most sense... wanting to fall cause you havent been able to in so long. at first when i saw it i was thinking more fo a mental thing with having failures but i think she's had enough of taht and she just needed to feel again... physically what it is like to be normal and fall. i really liked this bybyyu

Yeah, I got it. What's the point of falling, making your own mistakes and getting up on your own, when someone's always there to catch you?

Love it! Am I right with the metaphor? XD

you didnt go overboard.

it was kind of sweet.

LOVE IT! u didnt go overboard