 Millory 4/20/02 . chapter 6 Cum on Shawn hurry up and finish this you've tooken forever to write the next part cum on plz hurry up and finish it. |
 Rhiana Rae 12/14/01 . chapter 6Hey Shawn, this story is REEEEALLY Awesome! Hurry up and finish it, willya? Lol! Talk to you later! |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 12/7/01 . chapter 6Ty: O.o! GRIN! AND NOSEDIVE SCARED ME HALF TO DEATH! OH GOODNESS YOU GOTTA' CONTINUE!
Puppymon: No doubt! |
 americananime 12/4/01 . chapter 5Part Six can't come soon enough for me now. Also, I'd like to tell you, in regards to the story you ask me to continue"The New Comer I wrote a sequel, mainly because you ask, and I wanted to make sure you knew of it's existance... a lot about Wraith, even if I messed up the tenses compleatly.
Anyway, THIS story rocked. Mallory in Wonderland ... sorry, the pun was too strong to resist. I love it how she's alive in her dreams and she can feel it wasn't there an episode of Jonny Quest about that? I think there was. Anyway, I really love it, keep writing! |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 12/3/01 . chapter 5Ty: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO! MAL-MAL! WING YOU"VE GOTTA' LEAVE HER! GOTTA' SAVE YOUR BROTHER AND...AND...AND...*bursts into tears
Puppymon: If you can't tell, she loved this story. |
 Kestrel2 12/3/01 . chapter 5I absolutely love this story. Please continue and soon. I want to read the rest of it. |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 11/28/01 . chapter 4Ty: AWWW! I think Divey-kins is a) feeling ignored or b) has a crush on Mallory to.
Puppymon: Divey-kins?
Ty: I can call that cute duckey anything I want!
Puppymon: Girl you need help. *thinks* You really should change your name to Princess Tyler Briefs you know.
Ty: that just doesn't sound right.
Puppymon: whatever. |
 Wings of Speed 11/27/01 . chapter 4Unfair, UNFAIR, that's not a very fair place to end it at! More, want more! Please, soon? |
 Wings of Speed 11/27/01 . chapter 3Chapter 4, soon, please...I can't beg enough, believe me! |
 americananime 11/22/01 . chapter 2Please write more .. please? This is very intresting and I'd like to see where you're going with it. |
 Kimee 11/22/01 . chapter 1Hmm... and where have I seen this? *wink wink* |