 Squiffy8 2008-12-18 . chapter 1I love Ranma as a doctor, looking forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the good work.
Wishing you great inspiration,
~Squiffy |
 gaul1 2008-11-26 . chapter 1good chapter, keep up th good work,byes |
 Sefirot 2008-11-25 . chapter 1Really really interesting story. PLease don't leave it like this. I find the concept of a Ranma healer trully interesting. |
 Hiryo 2008-11-21 . chapter 1VERY NICE! And I hope that this fantastic fanfic will be updated soon! |
 moritynz 2008-11-14 . chapter 1I like it so far, nice ending there made me laugh. |
 WolfWing 2008-11-13 . chapter 1I remember this! Though, my fave of your works was A Small Detour. Any chance you might ressurect it? (If memory serves, you had a second version / rewrite once upon a time.) |
 borg rabbit 2008-11-13 . chapter 1"Doc, I got it covered. I talk to momma, and she stand behind me, so I know she help me out with all the details and junk." Ranma doesn't talk like this. He may be a little rough around the edges, but the anime does not corrupt the language this much.
Try:
"Doc, I got it covered. I talked ta momma, and she's standin' behind me, so I know she'll help me out with all the details and junk."
This sounds rough without sounding like an orc.
Wes |
 Nysk 2008-11-12 . chapter 1Good start!
I hope you will write more and leave who it anyone ranma ends up with in the dark for sometime. |
 James Birdsong 2008-11-12 . chapter 1 Oh my oh cool |