|Reviews for Her Sanctuary|
| Yanirca 1/17/13 . chapter 1
please make a sequel!111
| Godschildtweety 12/8/12 . chapter 1
| J. Crow Roth 6/4/12 . chapter 1
Cute and adorable in every sense of the words. I can't wait to finish the sequel.
| to lazy to log in 10/7/11 . chapter 1
if u really follow the story hinata was 5 when her sis was born, so when she was 7 hinabi was 2, so that is kinda pittaful if hinata couldnt bet her is a spar match lolz just sayin
| Arashi Mitarashi 4/19/11 . chapter 1
Dude this is awesome I wanna sugest the story "Lavander Eyed Love".
| Hammer231 2/5/11 . chapter 1
was kinda put off by hinata being kicked out of the clan, stopped reading and went ot another one of your stories "Kiss of Life" and it was amazing; came back to this story and wow really great plot im gonna read Precious Bonds now
| Mad Reminant 8/25/09 . chapter 1
touching nicely written
| OmegaDL50 7/3/09 . chapter 1
While this is a decent beginning to "Precious Bonds" however it seems Naruto and Hinata's relationship is a little too far developed for their age. I mean they are around 5 years old right?
So they both are obviously children, and on that subject of age, they both seem to not act the age they are given for this story, so it seems somewhat out of character and unrealistic at least according to their character personality in canon.
I'm not saying it's a bad story, far from it, as Naruto and Hinata are most definitely my favorite pairing, however for a children mindset, especially that of a 5 year old, they wouldn't understand the concepts of romance or even the true understanding of love beyond that of a simple crush from what a mature individual would be able to comprehend.
Other then a few grammatical and spelling errors, it's a good read, and I'm looking forward to continue reading Precious Bonds.
I just hope the story paces itself, and doesn't rush things along too quickly. But I have a feeling I'll still enjoy the story regardless.
Keep up the writing, you have a talent for this, but with a the help of a beta or pre-reader and some cleaning up of the slight errors, it will definitely become a polished fiction. I hope for such improvement so you can write an even greater story.
| Apex Soldier 5/23/09 . chapter 1
| schoolruler 5/20/09 . chapter 1
Why is this not just a part of Precious Bonds?
| NaruhinaDattebayo 5/13/09 . chapter 1
Love it. adding to fav.
| almostinsane 3/22/09 . chapter 1
Great story! This was rather interesting to read. Thanks for writing this. God bless!
| adfdsvn1 3/10/09 . chapter 1
well cute but now onto the sequel
| naruhina-fanboy-devlin 3/10/09 . chapter 1
this is a great story this is added to my favs
| oceanmoon 2/20/09 . chapter 1
wow..I am so glad that hiashi didn't mean to be mean. I was all that mother cracker jacker..Lol love this story it's awesome:)