No! -great- but sad

So cute ^-^

wow.

i love it.

maybe you could make a spin-off story about how they fell in love and up to that moment when she dies.

just a suggestion.

Aww, that was very sweet! Not as emotional as your death scenes are normally (meaning this time I didn't actually cry - for once! XD), but that's only because you just had 100 words to write it in.

Nice idea, as well!

KO xoxo

*mini-happy-dance* So cute! Good job on the 100-word limit!

Fantastic! Very touching! Great work yet again! (Much better than mine- I know I need a lot of work...)

*SB*

Aww... That was sad; but also cute. I loved it. :-)

HAHA! That's exactly what I was going to say! 'What else would I have expected from KK?'

Lawl. Nice work. I can imagine you sitting there, going 'pah, this is too easy!' LOL.

You DO do death scenes with an undeniably natural ability. I think death scenes are your thing. Haha.

Anywho. This is better than Mika's, I think. It'll probably win ^-^ As usual. I don't think I could even write a less-than-100 word story.

I might give it a shot.

But probably won't. Haha.

Cheerio!

LOVELOVE

Cherrie S

xoxo

Short, but very very very touching. It made me feel a little depressed over how sad it was, even if it was only 100 words.

Amazing job keeping it under 100, too. You didn't overuse and words. Kept it nice and simple. C: Great work! I really enjoyed.

Wow, even for 100 words, that was really well written!

It was good, but I dunno, drabble death scenes always seem so detached to me... It's not your fault, just something about the medium. You wrote a very good one :)

Also, the first review, which said this "could have been longer"? Completely hi-larious. Hee.

Aww thats so sad DD:

Bec xx

wow, short. Good story, it could of been longer though.