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Chaosmaiden07
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
I know a dozen ways to behead you with a hairbrush tone. Soo funny!
Rocky Gems
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Hahaha! That was quite funny! The only mistake in there is that Morzan has grey and blue eyes.
ChibiItachi-chan
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
*falls off her chair and laughs so hard that she accidently whacks her head on the computer desk, says ouch, and then continues laughing manically* I LOVED IT!
Dilu
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
*applauds*Well done, I love it! I can so imagine this happening, it was quite in character and still managed to get in modern humour. And I learned a new word- rookery!
My fave bits

"his deadly ‘I-know-a-dozen-ways-to-behead-you-with-a-hairbrush’ tone."

"The dragon flicked his tail in what could have passed for a rude gesture."

Happy Writing
~Dil
Sup3101
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
great, interesting and funny but no one in the reviews mentioned that you forgot the gedwey insignia
VampiresUnited101
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
SO FUNNY! I love your idea! So going on my favorites list!
See ya!
someone179
2008-12-11 . chapter 1
lol nice :)
xxDibDabxx
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
omg! lmao!
i loved the ending!
good job!
YoungDreamer
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
I loved it. Morzan is hilarious.
JaBoyYa
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
*rofl* I love the hairbrush look. *cracks up* and i love the (?) mark after beautiful. very funny.
Invaderm
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
He's not like the Morzan from your other stories. I'm guessing you were going after the book Morzan...

If you were, then you got him right, I want to smack him!
shurtugal88
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
Good Job, i must say awesome, finely got some Morzan and his dragon view awesome. Ya i think you got the right picture of morzan and his dragon i know this a fanfiction but damn cannonly he did not deserve a dragon. He must of done to it what Gabaitorx (SP?) did to Shruikin (SP?) i liked brisingr how it told a little bet more about them saying all those dragons lost their names thus they all lost their minds or their sense of self. I must say good job on Oromis that was a really good view of him in a different light lmao. Keep up the good work!
berauscht
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
oh lol, that was amazing! :D
David
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
LOL That made me laugh so hard!
JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It
2008-11-12 . chapter 1
Aw! This was cute! The imagery could've been expanded in some areas, but overall, the writing was excellent. I had a question, though. How old was Morzan here? Even as a youngster, I've somehow formulated my image of him to be serious and calculating--maybe a bit impatient, but very mature at a young age. Maybe he was bullied--he probably had to grow up fast and be smart enough to evade enemies he probably made from the very beginning. So, in it's entirety, your characterization of him didn't entirely match my own, but I suppose its difficult because we never really learn to much about him in the books. So yeah. I do have an account by the same name as I have listed above, if you want to reply. My login wouldn't work earlier. I've only posted Avatar: the Last Airbender fics on this site, but I plan to start up with some from the Inheiritance Cycle, if I can. But it's hard to expand on these books...they're so utterly complex! Anywho, thanks for the entertaining read!
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