 Chaosmaiden07 2009-09-20 . chapter 1I know a dozen ways to behead you with a hairbrush tone. Soo funny! |
 Rocky Gems 2009-07-23 . chapter 1Hahaha! That was quite funny! The only mistake in there is that Morzan has grey and blue eyes. |
 ChibiItachi-chan 2009-04-29 . chapter 1*falls off her chair and laughs so hard that she accidently whacks her head on the computer desk, says ouch, and then continues laughing manically* I LOVED IT! |
 Dilu 2009-04-25 . chapter 1 *applauds*Well done, I love it! I can so imagine this happening, it was quite in character and still managed to get in modern humour. And I learned a new word- rookery!
My fave bits
"his deadly ‘I-know-a-dozen-ways-to-behead-you-with-a-hairbrush’ tone."
"The dragon flicked his tail in what could have passed for a rude gesture."
Happy Writing
~Dil |
 Sup3101 2009-01-24 . chapter 1great, interesting and funny but no one in the reviews mentioned that you forgot the gedwey insignia |
 VampiresUnited101 2008-12-11 . chapter 1SO FUNNY! I love your idea! So going on my favorites list!
See ya! |
 someone179 2008-12-11 . chapter 1lol nice :) |
 xxDibDabxx 2008-11-23 . chapter 1omg! lmao!
i loved the ending!
good job! |
 YoungDreamer 2008-11-22 . chapter 1I loved it. Morzan is hilarious. |
 JaBoyYa 2008-11-20 . chapter 1*rofl* I love the hairbrush look. *cracks up* and i love the (?) mark after beautiful. very funny. |
 Invaderm 2008-11-14 . chapter 1He's not like the Morzan from your other stories. I'm guessing you were going after the book Morzan...
If you were, then you got him right, I want to smack him! |
 shurtugal88 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Good Job, i must say awesome, finely got some Morzan and his dragon view awesome. Ya i think you got the right picture of morzan and his dragon i know this a fanfiction but damn cannonly he did not deserve a dragon. He must of done to it what Gabaitorx (SP?) did to Shruikin (SP?) i liked brisingr how it told a little bet more about them saying all those dragons lost their names thus they all lost their minds or their sense of self. I must say good job on Oromis that was a really good view of him in a different light lmao. Keep up the good work! |
 berauscht 2008-11-13 . chapter 1oh lol, that was amazing! :D |
 David 2008-11-13 . chapter 1 LOL That made me laugh so hard! |
 JESUSFREAK-And-Proud-Of-It 2008-11-12 . chapter 1 Aw! This was cute! The imagery could've been expanded in some areas, but overall, the writing was excellent. I had a question, though. How old was Morzan here? Even as a youngster, I've somehow formulated my image of him to be serious and calculating--maybe a bit impatient, but very mature at a young age. Maybe he was bullied--he probably had to grow up fast and be smart enough to evade enemies he probably made from the very beginning. So, in it's entirety, your characterization of him didn't entirely match my own, but I suppose its difficult because we never really learn to much about him in the books. So yeah. I do have an account by the same name as I have listed above, if you want to reply. My login wouldn't work earlier. I've only posted Avatar: the Last Airbender fics on this site, but I plan to start up with some from the Inheiritance Cycle, if I can. But it's hard to expand on these books...they're so utterly complex! Anywho, thanks for the entertaining read! |