I love anything that deals with the turtles and Splinter's begings because it's a rare thing and most of the time the things we do see are more comical then of the serious nature. I swear I think you're one of the best TMNT writers ever! You just capture our heroes and their master so well that's scary but in a good way. I wish the creators would give us more like this - like your story. I think they're ruining it with going to the future.

Very cool.

This was wonderful! I love a good Splinter story, and this was probably one of the best I've seen. I liked how you formatted it in segments, and I especially liked the mystical ending scene. You did a beautiful job showing the gradual evolution of Splinter. Great job!

Wow. This is really cool! I love the way you made so mystical at the end

awesome story! it's not often you get to hear a good story about splinter :) keep up the good work

WOW a very good begining of your story ^_^ can't wait for more.