Wow!Poor Hayley but I think she will find true love with someone else.Update soon.

Very POWERFUL! Excellent work!:D

I bet it's Kimberly! I could tear her head off! Please continue soon! Update soon please!!

Glad you added more to this. Ouch, not so good for Hayley, but I guess it was inevitable. There's only so long something like that can go on without coming to a head.

So much great work in this chapter. It's so easy to identify with and feel Hayley's pain. I notice Tommy STILL hasn't identified the other woman, but right now I doubt that's really the point as far as Hayley's concerned.

Great work as always.

Ouch - I really feel for Hayley.

I'm glad that you decided to add another chapter to this. I feel so bad for Hayley though :(

Good continuation of the last chapter and good explantion of the OC. I'm interested to see what happens next. Poor Hayley, you just want to hug her in this one and bop Tommy upside the head.

Aw! Poor Hayley! =[

I'm anxious to see what the sequel has in store for these two. Great job!

this was great.

good story

Aww. This is so sad and moving. =( Poor Hayley. Will there be more? I hope so.

Please tell me you are not ending there. I want to see what happens and find out who the #^%itch is and what she do to make Tommy be cheater.

PLEASE TELL ME THERE A SEQUEL.

Ouch. Be a little meaner, why don'tcha...good story, though!

this was really good. it would be great if it had a companion piece to have tommy's side of the story.