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hms fan
2009-08-19 . chapter 1
grate stuff loved it
xo Gabriella ox
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
That was so cute!
You know what's weird? I somehow managed to notice that Chaz's name backwards is Zach. Was that on purpose?
Love the story so much!
Job Well Done.
UnwrittenSpeech
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
Haha, I loved the ending. Good one.
mishyB
2009-07-01 . chapter 1
what a hilarious ending. i laughed out loud literally. Nice one shot.
ibelieveintruelove
2009-06-06 . chapter 1
Oh I loved it! I felt so bad for Gabriella that she didn't get the autograph, stupid Chaz. But Troy is so sweet :) And the ending was perfect, with just the right amount of humor to make it a happy one :) Nice job!
Flyawayhome624
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
Love this story, it was so cute.
higuma~
2009-01-06 . chapter 1
OMG LOL "'Who said that you are invited?" LOL i luaghed my butt off!
dawgs of '12 Sammy Leigh
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
That was preety cool. You need to continue it cause it was amazing.
vanilla902
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
hahah that was too awesome thanks so muchh lol
cheaterinpink
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
I read this story before, I think, a REALLY long time ago. But, see, I still remember it, without scrolling through the story. Which meant that it probably stood out to be. Why? I guess 'cause it's just really relatable to.

I'm never personally gone through this kind of thing. I've never met a celebrity, let alone someone even remotely famous. Unless you count a few authors. I think that how we fangirls blow up a meeting with their idol is quite true. It happens all the time, everytime a celebrity goes out. And I'm sure any girl can relate to this, even if she hasn't personally experienced it. I feel really sorry for Gabriella. It's heart-breaking, really, how you can be SO close and still miss your chance. You described the emotions quite well, though I think a bit more subtly would be more meanigful. But, still, it's good. Troy is so sweet and comforting, and Gabriella's really lucky to have Troy as her boyfriend. xD. The last three lines were hilarious.

“That, or ask him if he’s into threesomes,” Gabriella said, as a sudden afterthought.

“Doesn’t he have a girlfriend?”

“Who said that you are invited?”

So, good job. :D

Amanda Bridget
GypsyGreen
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
Aha, loved it!

teamedwardakazannassarules101
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
lol so funny and good... That happen to me once i was sad but got over it..
alexandragrace-xo-
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
:D That was awesome
Loved it >_<
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didumissmeofcourseudid
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Aw! Dani that was straight from the heart and my own heart goes out to you.

You made me laugh when you described that pushy fan, I could so relate to that hehe!

Now if everyone had a Troy waiting for them I doubt it wouldn't be such a hardship.
Kathryn Mason-Sykes
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
hahahaha! I loved the last couple lines. I've actually used them myself in conversation with a previous boyfriend. But neither here nor there...I liked the concept of this story. The emotional impact celebrities have on our lives is rarely written as well as you've done here. Thanks for posting!
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