i like this fic so far! you should update it! i would so love to read more

-luna

WOW! I would NEVER expect Ember to do that, especially after reading ur SOC...well...actually I COULD see Ember doing that now that I think about it...

Wow...babble-babble mutter-babble ?(undeciferable) at a loss fer words here... *deep breath* ok. NICE! You're like advertising Neo's story, and explaning things too. I think I'll read chapter 2 then go read Neo's story now.

Phew, long, but incredible. That fight with Ember was well portrayed, man. I thought she was gunna die...and I thought Spyro or Cynder would have stepped out in spirit form to stop her. Still, great work man. That's why your my co-writer now, lol
Yours,
G.I

wow, only 8 reviews for this? I thought I already did...guess I was wrong. Well, its a great synapse of things to bring in Blade and Glacia. It was a sad story to begin with; can't imagine what's next.
Yours,
G.I

Ah, someone needs to kick Ember's **. I would have loved seeing her get PWNED by her own knife...horny lil dragon she is. Feel so sorry for Glacia. Wonder how things will turn up
UPDATE!

REVIEW...Hello. Nice work man. Very nice. Love Neo-rabbit's stuff...keep it up man. You rule!

...Whoa! Once again, I am impressed by this. The depiction of Ember's mental instabilities was nothing short of brilliant as well as the physical confrontation between herself and Glacia! Such emotion and love between Ember and Flame, I love it! This story definitely lived up to my stories standards. And who are these mysterious entities and what's their interest in Blade? Also, what's going to happen next with Ember seeing that's she's still in mental turmoil? I guess we'll find out next chap! Heh! Great work!! Also, I administered a poll on my bio for voting. You should check it out sometime! I'll see ya around. Ciao!

Will do. And I'd say the Guardians better lock Ember in the dragons' mental hospital for a few years lol. Do continue.

oui... nice chapter very dramatic. How could spyros son look like cynder too?

...Wow. Dude, see, this is exactly why I chosed you for the job. Not what I expected in reference to genre, but this is even better. I tell ya, I could not have done a better job. And love the title, by the way.

The emotions and tensions of the characters, especially with Ember, Flame, and Glacia, the descriptive creativity, and everything else, extremely spectacular! Especially adding contents from my story 'Together.'

Blade might be a year or two years old although the story clearly didn't indicate age. Regardless, he is great and it fits good with the story!

And I was surprised that you added your character. Terradon, in the story. Maybe with your permission, I might be able to use him in my 'Blade' story given the chance.

I wonder what will happen next, especially between Ember, Flame, and Glacia. So much cause, so much effect, and so much tension to simply qualify this as a good drama story.

Keep at it, man.

Oh, by the way, I managed at least three or four chaps for my prequel to 'Together.' But I won't post it until I have finished, and edit, at least up to chapter five. Good plan, don't ya think? Heh, Heh!

I'll be in touch, and looking forward to the next chap of this story and TSOC. Ciao!

Having read both of Neo's stories in my spare time, I must say you're doing a very good job with this prequel! I especially think you're doing well with Glacia and Ember! Keep up the good work!

WOW!
super cool!
awesome! so good!
loves your stories!

ok first, awesome beginning. Neo's stories alyways blew me away, and I'm glad he picked you to do this prequel. You two are both incredible authors, but one thing always bothered me about the his first story, and the beginning of this one. here's what I mean:
“Who are you?”

“Glacia.”

“Why am I here?”

“I saved your life.”

“WHY?!”

“You look me in the eyes and you answer my question..are...you...a suicide?”

“Get your hands off me.”

“Oh, my god. You really are a suicide, are you?”

“Who's Cynder?”

“She...was my mate.”

wouldnt she ask him if he was suicidal, and not a suicide? I've never heard of someone being a suicide before until after the act. anyway, other than that minor thing, this looks sweet. faved!

Awesome work as always and I'll wait to read more of it. Keep it going dude.