If you're not going to finish this, then I'd like to...

Dear readers,

I never should have continued this. I should have left it, shining happiness that it was, and never put T'Pol through such pain. I do have a smidgin of the next chapter written, but it's so hard to write something so sad, especailly to such a wonderful and innocent character like T'Pol. I will try to finish it this summer, but sado-masochists beware, it WILL have a happy ending! Grrr, I hate pain...

Love always forever,

Casey Greene

Great story. I'm sure you have a lot on your plate, but please give us some more chapters. I look forward to see what happens.

This is good, it lacks something though... more chapters... Keep up the good work!
More, more, more!

Great story; are you planning on a next part?

first enterprise fic i ever read, and I LIKE!

Very well written and surprisingly strong for a G rated story (I think I would have gone with PG just for the many implications). BUt please tell me it doesn't end like this? There's got to be a chapter 6, or 7 or whatever.. THis is no way to finish.

Smooching! Whoo-hoo! Oh, please continue, I can't *wait* to hear more. This is so cool!

Hey Casey. You already know what I think about this story, but I thought I'd review it just because...er...I dunno. Just because. Yeah, that's it. _ Anyway...Don't worry Carrie, the story's FAR from over. Subspace_butterfly, wait till you read the next part...you'll probably whine about characterization some more, (honestly, I don't see where you're coming from) but it gets really good next part. Ok Case, I'm gonna stop before you hurt me. *looks scared, runs for cover*

i don't want to insult you. far from it! this example, i'm assuming, is no example of your normal work. i mean, fanfiction's hard, and you seem to have fallen into an all-too-common trap- you've taken things to quickly and both your characters act *out* of character. read this story and envision it on tv: would it actually happen? i don't think so. i understand how you feel, you just want to run with the characters. it must have been fun to write. but characterization should be a priority, since the people reading it often watch the show *for* the characters; hence they read the fanfic to see development in the characters.

I liked the story and thought it was well written but is it finished?

on the last three paragraph as well as your story
Here, Here

I really liked your story Casey, but felt the bit about "defending" T'pol's consideration of abortion a little silly. Not the points you made, but the fact that you felt a need to defend yourself BEFORE a single "flame" was thrown your way.

I have enjoyed the three chapters you have up.
I can't wait to what you are going to do next.

Very enjoyable reading! I like the story premise and characterization a lot. Please write more!)