very very good. Its so difficult to find such good-quality pieces. absolutely amazing.

there is a very compelling rhythm to this story. it reads as if it were a poem that wasn't written in stanzas. the power behind the words contrasted perfectly with the whispers. this piece shows true talent. great job.

i love it

I like it...beautiful

Well done!

omg this story was great i loved it soo much!

That was cool.