This was very well written and original. I really loved how you wrote Inoue's point of view. Ishida's actions were spot on and their interactions were very in character as well. I especially liked how you used this situation to reveal Inoue's feelings. It's definitely something I could see happening. I only wish I knew where the mist was coming from or where they were exactly. (Did the mist appear because of Inoue's clouded feelings?) But I really enjoyed this. Actually, I'm kind of sad I didn't read this earlier because this piece was definitely worth the read. Great Job and I hope you continue writing soon.

oo! Nice!

LOL. dibs on the first review (hopefully)!

anyway, thank you for making such a good fic. although, there are a bunch of questions left unanswered like: why did they land on such a situation? why were the two of them together? where exactly was the place of mists? and so on... but i could understand that maybe you want to focus more on the interaction between the two.

nonetheless, i give it 3 and a half out of five stars. ^^