 Vhendira 2009-07-18 . chapter 2Hey! Why'd it stop?
Your stories have good flow to them. I especially like this chapter, most stories seem to have trouble keeping the subject characters in character. I can't wait for the next update.
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*bribes for faster update with plate of fresh baked cookies* |
 dieFiend 2008-11-18 . chapter 2I = intrigued!! Definately looking towards the next installment :D It's good that you've given a reason behind them getting closer; you know, even though Kanda comforting Allen is pretty OOC (not that it's a bad thing :P), including concrete fact and reason (especially one as sensitive as rape) makes a better impression on readers, in my opinion. People are going to remember this a little better, and it makes the story more enjoyable because we can see a back story...good for character background :D |
 byrdiesinging 2008-11-14 . chapter 2aw!
cute!
its good!
and
i noticed you changed it to m
yay
high five! |
 YugiKitten 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Aws thats so adorable |
 ShioriShiro 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Such a great story! Update please! :D |
 xXJustAnotherFangirlXx 2008-11-14 . chapter 2NYA! its so... so... so... KYA... so CUTE! thanks so much for writing! |
 xXJustAnotherFangirlXx 2008-11-14 . chapter 1aw... that was like... bittersweet chocolate... bitter at first... but sweet later... nyahn... the rape scene was extremely tasty thou ( im such a perv) haha.. thanks so much for writing this! |
 mirai17 2008-11-13 . chapter 1Aww this is cute! I love it! The way Yu is behaving towards Allen makes me feel all warm and fuzzy lol. |
 byrdiesinging 2008-11-13 . chapter 1eek!
shouldn't this be rated m?
well whatever
its good! |