I absolutely love this fic :D Looking forward to the next chapter

I know it's kind of a pain and all, but you could use some of the secondary characters, like Matsuri, Princess Yuki, Sasame. They are part of the series, just not as well known.

I also somewhat want to see what you have in store for Baki. Not to mention Lady Chiyo.

Also, I curious if you will be adding Rin into the mix. Will Kabuto be doing something different since in the series he is Sasori's spy, and there is sort of no need for that. Unless he is another double agent between Orochimaru and Tsunade

Wow..that chapter was great! Very informative! But, it was also really somber...I kinda wanna read a happier chapter 
I love this story though! The lemon was great!
Can't wait for more!

I love the whole Fish cake nickname. so cute. X)

Yah! Finally! Some smexing action!

... Now that I got that outta my system, that was a really good chapter! It makes me happy to know that there are people who can write that well.

Lovely chapter! I totally love the final sceen! Gentle Kakashi is a masterpeice... And the way you picteured Naru as an angel - is so sweet! I just love the story!

“Sh.” Kakashi hushed as he pulled the boy closer until he had him straddled in his lap. “Sh.” He soothed as he clung to him and rocked him slowly side to side while he rubbed slow circles on his back. And when he felt the first tears soak through his thin shirt he pulled his mask down and kissed them away carefully. “Sh. I got you.” He was pretty sure the boy wouldn’t be able to see his face in the dark but even if he could he didn’t care anymore. He just wanted to sooth this young man he cared about more than anything. “I got you now.”

This was so sweet! YAY! I love sweet things like this. Makes me want someone to come hold me like that.

And the breaking of the entire eye scan system because his eyes didn't match! Awesome! And, just to help you support your story, I have met a few REAL, LIVE people with miss-matched eyes. One violet, one blue. One green, one blue. One hazel, one green. One hazel, one blue. It's creepy to see at first, esp the ones with hazel and blue, because they look just so different. But the creepiest of all to look at is albino eyes. They have a strange, pink-ish blue color, because they are so light you can see some of the red from the blood vessels.

Another great chapter, made only better with a hint of lemon. I think having Tonton as the secretary is funny. Please update soon!
~A Bientot~

only for Naruto would 'fishcake' be a sweet endearment =D

this was a great chapter..and i'm glad tsunade and jiraiya are gonna like fate take its course :]
and that is so weird and scary!! havning the guy who killed your parent's heart in your chest!! whoa talk about freaky! :O poor naruto :[
but alas! he has kakashi there to help him out<3
and for names you haven't used yet..
hmm you haven't used raidou yet..or kotetsu and izumo?? hmm..what about asuma?..hm
i can't quite remember what names you have and haven't used xD haha

haha loved Ton Ton... though was not expecting the heart transfer, that is pretty messed and a nice twist!

woah. smexy.

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

Wow, that was hot!

Nice well written chapter. However, I do have one question, Does Kakashi already know what's going through the boy's mind since he was there? Like knowing of some type of nightmares he was receiving?