I have 3 words for this:

Tragically touching anguish.

I liked. Very interesting!

Beautifully written.

I find the last line a great one for ending this nice tid bit :)

Oh my gosh; this was SO great!! I was really disappointed when it ended. A beautiful look into Haruka's thoughts of Michiru. Please write more!

Not horrible. I don't have much to say. Maybe close to great but wasn't fantastic. You did well. I hope you enjoyed writing it. It was nice

great!