i really enjoyed it! i think it would be good with more added to it too =) awesome story!

i loved your story, it's just so true, someone can be perfect in every aspect but there's that someone who is completely imperfectely right for you!

Ok i am what some would call a hardcore HHR and as you would expect while i don't agree with your choice of couple i think it is well written except that your harry respects Hermione yes but one thing they could agrue about is how harry hates authority Thats all

well written! but just to warn ya, there might be a few flames from hardcore h/hr fans. although it is harry and hermione it is basically a r/hr ship. but well written and keep up the good work.

I really liked this idea!

Not bad, structured well and believable. :)

I really liked both of your new stories, your a really great writer! I've read all of your HP fanfiction and its amazing, but my favorite's are definitely the ones in Harry's pov though!