So who will this mysterious girl be? A traitor? A lover? Maybe an innocent bystander he has to save or a partner that helps him beat the stuffings out of this Italian Alien? Continue, ill be rooting for u! :P

Please update soon!

cool

Wow, just.. Wow, you're an amazing writer and I love your story. It's captured my attention and I plan on reading the rest of it. Keep on writing.

Daniel X3

What is this mark?

It's very annoying.

This really good! It's very similar to the actual book, all the way down to Daniel's little jokes. Keep up the good work!

thanks for the feedback guys. it is appreciated. i'll have chapters three and four up very VERY soon. trust me. thank you also for reading! stay tuned...and watch the skies.

This is well written! It's not over-done (trust me, some people burn their stories black!), yet it had enough to keep a person going. Similar style to the orignial books. I like it a lot and am looking forwards to reading future chapters.

haha! love it! that was great, and a nice length! the prologue was a tad short, but this made up for it! i loved it, and i beg of you to update soon!

pwetty pwease with daniel, carmela and a cherry on top update soon?

inkypinkyanna

a word of advice to danny: "never go against a sicilian when death is on the line!" (thats from the princess bride, just thought i'd share that with you.)

SAME DAMN STORY

So are you going to finish?

um, ok, u make it sound like hes James Bond :(