This was a very good story. A great read. Congratulations on this work.

I completely understand the story, but I can't help but feel jipped (for Relena's sake) that Heero was standing right outside the window.

A sad piece of fan fic, but good all the same. :)

Nice, I was taken with your line "soldier of ruin and prince of the stars". Very poetic.

There are a couple of spelling errors (like "that" instead of "than") and the underline in annoying, but it's a good start. There is one line that doesn't make any sense to me: "though it didn't take much of a true though to realize just "how" the event had gone on."
Keep writing and avoid underlining everything.

HEY ! it's pretty good! I like it so far! 4 in the morning.. lol! keep it up! i like it

I'm going to be blunt: lose the lines, you'll lose readers because of it. Other than that, it's cute.