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Misato Pen
2009-12-02 . chapter 8
XDD. Cute!
Persian
2009-09-01 . chapter 7
A Jadine/Piccolo sequel! Yes! I'm so happy! Kami is such a perv...
La Belle Etoile
2009-07-09 . chapter 7
Not bad. I noticed some spelling errors, but that might be from you typing at, what was it? One in the morning? Otherwise, it was fairly good, and I'm glad to finally have another chapter. It's been so long that I kinda forgot what was going on. >_>; Looking forward to more!!
Bluebanany
2009-07-09 . chapter 7
I'm curious! Is Piccolo up to the chalenge?
Misato Pen
2009-07-09 . chapter 7
Great chapter. Yes... your updates are very slow, but who cares, I love how its going. That of giving pleasure while he is traing, is a little weird. I imagine Jadine having sex with a invisible man. O.o
Bluebanany
2009-05-21 . chapter 3
I don't really have time to figure out how to send a message so I give you a response via a review. Well I just thought that you deserved a lot more reviews, so I decided to make a difference. I'm glad you apreciate it! :) I am just very attracted to your outgoing writing stijl. It makes the simplest things interesting to read. Also I noticed a lot of improvement over de chapters. i can see the difference between your first jadine and your second jadine fic. You succeded on the character development I think.

I would like to see the drawing! And it is always nice to recieve some reviews myself :) I experienced a hard time when I almost got no reviews per chapter. That sucked! So that was also a motivation to review you as a fellow P/OC writer! I just know how it feels. have in mind that english is not my first language.

Greetings,

Bluebanana
Bluebanany
2009-05-21 . chapter 6
PLEASE update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Greetings from Holland X
Bluebanany
2009-05-21 . chapter 5
Still very sad, but also realistic. I guess Bulma was right...
Bluebanany
2009-05-21 . chapter 4
it;s heart aching, but also very good.
Bluebanany
2009-05-21 . chapter 1
haha aw poor piccolo
Misato Pen
2009-05-04 . chapter 6
Hi! Nice fic. I haven`t see that you wrote a sequel. Well, I will read it :P Update soon :)
Ma Jr.
2008-12-28 . chapter 4
What's he training for? I read the story that was before this, it was good. This is good to though. Kudos to you.
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