cute

that was cute!

Aww this was cute

lol, aw how cute

nice work! especially for being rushed! i'm gonna try to do this... but i'm not sure i'm gonna be able to make the deadline... because i have homework i have to do.. AND it'll be my first fic, so i gotta figure out how to do things... lol :D nice job though! :D

hahaah, 'at least i could reach the counter' lol! that had to be one of the funniest lines! i love reading about momo mocking toshiro's shortness(is that even a word) anyway, great job! and are you planning on doing the other one, or no?

This story was adorable; I loved their bantering. It was so suited for a budding couple like them; great job! You did a wonderful job with the simplicity of this one-shot.