I know you were finished with this story long long ago however I never finished it and now I have. What I way to leave it! Van went to Hitomi's world, porque? Why? It doesn't make sense the beam of light is so implusive. Well either way it was good. Later days

I love the way u write. And i love your writing. lol I'm not even half down but it's asome anyway

this one the best fanfics iv ever read!

I love it!

Just adding you to my favorites.

Adaquate storyline, slight AU and major ooc on meryl's part but other than that its ok.

Millerna's still kidnapped, Arik seems to be part Draconian, and Van ends up on earth... Wonderful fic, please write the second book! Otherwise I'll die of not knowing what happens afterwards x.O

Great

what! Over? There better be a sequel! this is just too much of a cliff hanger! What about Mellerna? What about Van? What about the one girl? What about everything! You can't just stop it there!

WOW! I can't wait for the next book!

Heylo again

Quite an acton packed chapter, isn't it? I like it, and the ending with it. It's sad, but so right at the same time. newayz, keep writing and ttfn!

Kai-rah

This ending positively reeks with potential; I can't wait for the next book! A goood conclusion to an excellent fic. A suggestion though: the chapter begins on the wedding day, but a few segments later the bad guys are plotting evil for the wedding that will happen "in two days". It messes your timeline. Cheers!

What? Van ended up on Earth?

Whoa...so Van's now on the Moon of Illusions? Interesting. What's going to happpen? I want to know! But since in the last chapter you said you'd rwrite a sequel, I hope you do. THis was a wonderful chapter, and I'm so glad that they finally got married.

Okay, this is going to be long, but so is your fic, so it all works out. Do you have any idea how good this is? My ass in numb and I have a headache from sitting at the computer for so long and yet I cannot stop. I think I love everything about this story, the new characters, the plot, your interpretations of the Esca cast, it's all amazing. The whole Kathis thing, especially with Merle, is a wicked idea. But I have questions.

Why don't middle heirs get one? (i.e. Kira) and are they always female, or does it depend on the sex of their protectorate? Is there any significance to arikkira? Are Mot Setet Draconian? You've hinted as suc Your fic bears a striking resemblance to the as-yet unposted one I'm currently writing; I also have many original characters and the fic is becoming epic in porportions. I worry that mine is growing out of control, but I don't think yours is. You keep the various plot threads from tangling, and I never felt that you were stretching yourself too thin in regards to large-scale character development. They're all good. Oh, and lastly, the first wedding proposal was SUCH a tease, you naughty you! I thought is was V& hope you post more soon!

i love your story so far! you kept updating so fast! just kept me going and i couldnt review... i like to review when ive read all the chapters posted... great character development! lots of twists and mysteries... i love it! id like to see more on hitomi and van... but i know how hard it is to keep up with all the characters at once! keep writing!