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Reviews for: The Unhappy Prince
jc'amour
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
this was adorable, and now i know where lurking in the shadows is going :)
jc'amour
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
this was adorable, and now i know where lurking in the shadows is going :)
Lilcalibaby2002
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
Look! Babies! Ooh, cute! Is this supposed to be a stand-alone or a preview of things to come? Either way...babies! Nice job!
bon
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
I like that it ties in with Lurking. I also like how Caspian is such a good Father. Keep up the good work
emeraldteardrops
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
That was sweet. :) I liked it.
Spangleypony
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
lovely, sweet story, especially where Caspian picks Rillian up. Whats the timeline, was Caspian king and the same time as Susan and her siblings? Or did Susan stay in Narnia the second time?

Good story, a few grammer errors e.g. 'your mother and I's' should be your mothers and mine. :)
spacecadette
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Aww... it was so cute... I love Caspian as a dad and I totally agree with your stance on fandom... I used to be a Literati shipper from Gilmore Girls and I still am so I still watch vids and the read the occasional fic but the message boards have just kind of died... It's sad when it happens and I do fear for this pairing also however sometimes real life just gets in the way.

Anyway, loved your story.
onelastchance
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
i hope you haven't gotten my hopes up about how Lurking really ends with this! very cute.
Elizabeth
2008-11-13 . chapter 1
OMG! That was freaking adorable. So I totally thought the summary was a play on words and Caspian was unhappy but this was so much better! Mean Caspian becomes Daddy Caspian...awsome
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