This will be very amusing if this turns out to have the pairing of Ramza and Altima together.

First off, I believe we should get you into anger management before you go postal on us all. ;)

Critique: You spelled Craven two different ways, and had a couple of type-os (like I never do)

Favorite line: "Gritty whorls of dust danced across the gray tundra, racing in and out of the husks of long forgotten civilizations"

Good stuff dear Ben, Good stuff. Post more