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Jen Rock
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
This is great. It explains how DNAmy ended up with Monkey Fist's statue in the series finale. I loved the way she veered so sharply between sweet and crazy. The rice cakes line was great and the characterizations were all perfect. Great job. I do hope you'll continue this.
Reader101w
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Very good story,
you have captured the characters very well.

one question though, didn't Sensei and DMAmy met before? when she kidnapped him in 'Gorilla Fist'.

Reader101w
Mekal
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
YAAY!!
You're back!
And with all your strength, seeing how that one-shot was great!

I mainly loved the humor side (poor Sensei!), but the other sides were great too!

See ya!
Mekal, the French Rookie
Darev
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
Did you plan for Amy to somehow release Fiske from his prison? Are you seriously considering turning that premise into a fic? Is that your next project?

I would like to know just how she released him from that tomb. Exploring that mystery would make for good story-telling; but will Kim and Ron be involved? The Yono would make an excellent addition to the story. Wonder where he went after Fiske was trapped.

When you make up your mind about it, give me a heads-up.

~Darev
LilyHellsing
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Lmao! XD DNAmy certainly was in character; I can see her crystal clear saying 'cuddlebunny' in the same sentence with 'plunging world into darkness' etc XD This was very good; for some reason, I really liked the 'Sensei felt like his grandmother caught him stealing rice cakes' thing. Dunno why, but it was an excellent example.
Good job ^^
daccu65
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
The combination of Ed's mechanical genius and Amy's emotion is powerful, indeed.

An entertaining one-shot that explains how Amy had Monty with her at the end of 'Graduation.'

Thanks for the story.

daccu65
Slyrr
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Heh - DNAmy always seems to come off crazy. I'm kind of curious to know the 'secret' of how she got Monkey Fist loose if the magic said he was supposed to stay there. I'm sure it must be 'the power of love' or something...

Sensei came off wise and sage as always. I'm not sure how he could 'protest' to someone making off with a statue anyway. The scrolls containing the enchantment to release the Yono were gone anyway (or lost).

Excellent stuff as always!
PengyChan
2008-11-14 . chapter 1
Aw, this was adorable. And deep. AND funny, which is quite an achievement. Needless to say, I loved every line of it XD

I had never wondered what an interaction between Sensei and DNAmy could be like, and I just loved your take on it. They both were perfectly IC, and it was especially amusing how Amy immediately told him what she was planning to do and was all friendly while Sensei thought she wanted to release Monty from his stone state for power at first. And you know, the bit about how Sensei felt like his grandmother had caught him stealing rice cake made me grin for a while XD

The line about how Amy makes her own paths made me stop reading for a moment. I cannot quite tell why, but it really struck me for some reason.
Even thoug I already knew she would manage to move the statue since she had it with her in Graduation, I couldn't help but go all "YAY" when she managed to do so X3

I love it that Sensei decided to let her take Monty away after he saw she had succeeded to lift him and he understood her motivations - maybe it really was fate she would get him.

I'm glad you decided to leave the door open: it works extremely well as a one-shot, but it could also be an awesome start for a great fic. Hey, let me know should you ever decide to do more with this, okay? ;)
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