Oh, Cordy. She is amazing, and all of this was so perfectly in character. Wonderful.]

A great story. Very good.

hey,

nice fic. very very sad. i loved it. it has that sandra(tm) atmosphere to it. might sound silly, but it's true.

saicho_18 slytherin -

oh...how I love non-sequiters...amazing, I love stream of consciencesness stories, and you've executed (in a good way) this one perfectly! I love it!

You write absolutely jthe best Cordelia i've read . More, please?

I don't know that I buy the basic premise here that Cordelia's got all this pent-up anger that she's not expressing. As "Earshot" and just about every other episode of BTVS and ATS tell us, if Cordelia has something on her mind, she pretty much says so. And if she were feeling this ticked-off and neglected, she'd DEFINITELY say so. I think the problems you set out for her here are legitimate, and possibly the feelings are but I think she'd speak out loud and clear about them.

Knock me over with a feather, because I believed this Cordelia.

Excellent story, and very insightful. Both stream-of-consciousness and second person work really well for Cordelia. I'm looking forward to further stories from you.

What an incredible Cordy-pov you have here. The flamester down there is freakin' clueless, so just ignore it, okay? You've got the whole crew down just perfect. And the language? Even more perfect. Way to go, woman! Don't let the twits (who can't even spell scatological terms correctly) get you down, 'cause you've got actual talent. Use it for an encore, pronto!

intriguing

what utter shite. You've written Cordy as even meaner than she is on screen and Angel even more stupid. Not realistic at all.

Oh this is good! write more Angel fic please.

I give this fic a full on "Wow!" It makes you think. The second-person works perfectly here, getting us inside Cordy's head even better than first person would, IMHO. Very, very well done!

Oh, wow. I don't know what else to say... Having said that, this was incredible: the characterizations, the pov, the dircetion, all of it. It mirrors my own thoughts as to the resolution of Cordelia's condition as well. Great story, I must remember it in case we ever get the "favorite stories" section back on our profile.

Great intrapersonal story.