"Then he stepped back, frowned, and leaned forward to adjust it again. No, still not straight. He adjusted the tilt of the mirror again. Still not straight. He reached out for a third time—"

I loved this part a lot. So Kid! It made me smile. Kid, Liz and Patty were very in character and these scenes were all came alive for me. Your writing style is nice, and the way you portrayed the three's relationship was great - Especially in VI. Their hesitation and doubtful-ness, excluding Patti, naturally. Spirit made me laugh a lot too! (And I realised, 8 drabbles for the symmetry! Gah, am I slow --; ) Anyway, nice job here.

i like this

Your writing of these three make me terribly depressed, because nobody can write them as wonderfully as you do and I'm almost finished reading all of your work.

:)

I love it, so many stories and all of them wonderful

I officially am a fan of your Kid and co. stories. I, however, kind of wish that these mini stories had been in order. ^_~

Breathtaking :D

Good stuff
hope to read more

Eight good ficlets, everyone was in character and at least half of them could even work as canon. I think I've managed to work out what order they'd be in chronologically, well six of them anyway.
VII
I
IV
II
VI
VI

I'm not sure where the other two would fit though.

Perfect, just perfect. The way you write those three is amazing: following the dynamics we all know and love but with that extra insight that makes it all the more wonderful.

And, LOL:

“Well-you-know-he-didn’t-seem-interested-at-all-in-any-of-the-girls-and-maybe-we-should-have-asked for-some-applications-from-boys-and-well-he-does-seem-to-like-interior-decorating-an-awful-lot,” Spirit gasped out in a rush.

XD. Oh, SPIRIT XD

So artfully written. I haven't found that much quality Soul Eater fanfiction that isn't pure smut or too juvenile, so I was really happy to come across your writing. I love all three characters here, they're perfectly canon and the scenarios you put them in are just enough to bring out their personalities. I especially love the scene where Kid backs out of killing that one borderline soul, how he subtly shows that he cares for Liz and Patti. And the dinner that he has with Liz...so cute. I'm still getting used to the idea of an OT3 with them, as I feel Liz would be much better for him than Patti would, but it's cute nonetheless. On to read your other fics...

You have a wonderful grasp of these characters. I have to be honest and say that I tend more to shy away from these three because I find them hard to get across, Patti in particular. So I tend to be nitpicky when I read them and when they go wrong, they go wrong! But you have a wonderful insight into the three and manage to get across their characters perfectly. You can feel the bond that they share and the things that Kid said and how you've brought out his character had me grinning too.

Oh god, what a good laugh! You captured them all perfectly. The 6th and 7th ones were my personal favorites. Keep up the genius work! :3

Eight drabbles. Whoops, didn't know someone had already done the "eight" thing when I wrote mine. ^^;

This is another really great piece. I especially liked Second Glance, for the humor, and Chances, for the character insight.

My word, you write these three so amazingly well, you realize. You have these lovely lines of gold, and wonderful characterization that's just fantastic, and it's all so descriptive and lovely.

Very, very nice.

My favorite line: “Yes, but I think that might actually be normal.”

~Jenni~

This was also a really nice one to read. Through a lot of short ones you get to see the strength of the bond between this group. Honestly I'd put them as my second favourite team. Haven't gotten that much development in the anime, but this is a nice way to flesh them out.

Agree that the bat fight actually makes so much sense. You could see Kid acting like that and Patti holding the fort while Kid had a breakdown.

Even the part where Patti started the physical relationship with Kid makes sense with her character. She is the type that will charge into things without a great amount of hesitation. Plus she's a good motivator for both Kid and Liz.

Honestly this was well written.