OH MY GOD! you don't kno0w how much I love this story.. It's awesome..

This was such a wierd but cute fic! I loved the collab with supernatural!

I have read your other fanfic stories and this is my favorite, by far! I love New Moon AU stories and this one will be read again :) I enjoyed all the extra additions to the Swan family, and how Dean and Bella were together for awhile. There was a lot going on in this story, but I was definitely captivated and drawn in. I stayed up until almost 5am reading! Thank you for sharing your story with the fanfic community.

I kind of saw this coming... but do wonder about paternity. I am thinking Edward's and that this child can help save them from the apocalypse. Or at least I hope so!

Can I just say how much I love Dean in your story. His attitude and hotness are just downright delicious :)

I love little CJ'S thoughts. Such a poor little dude... but I know help is on the way.

Just WOW! I never thought I'd like a pairing that didn't involve Edward with Bella... but that was so hot. I love the dynamics between Bella and Dean. I wouldn't be unhappy to see them get an HEA :)

Jeezus, I cry on the last chapter... I held on till dean... damnit, here I go again.

Great story.

She seems to do a lot of... fainting.

Too funny!

Not only dos she have sexy times with some-one else, but they are bigger!

Don't think of this as a flame, think of it as some constructive criticism. Step away from the keyboard, miss. Go read a hell of a lot more books, and more fanfiction, and maybe some guides on what absolutely not to do when writing. You're tripping over every amateur mistake, which is fine if you want to stay an amateur, praised only by other teenagers and preteens. Most people don't want that, but maybe you do. I don't know.
What I'm saying here is stop polluting the internet with your tropes and horrific grammar. Get a penname that doesn't indicate that you are a 13 year-old-girl who went to see all the movies and thought Robert Pattinson was a babe or something (spoiler alert, he really isn't). Come back when you can look at this fic and instead of feeling proud of yourself, feel shame that you ever posted such a thing.
And if you think this was a flame, and you're determined to continue without attempting to improve, please, the internet begs you: Step away from the keyboard, get your hand off the mouse, and find another hobby.

the story starts good but to quickly becomes to busy with too many people. I hope that you bring edward and bella back together in this.

This story was very different thN most twilight fics I read. Thanks for sharing.

I have read the story twice and its still one of the best I have ever read . You have major skills and I hope everything worked out for you . Good look

I enjoyed this story very much! Thank you!