Awesome story, it was very well written. Quite descriptive and emotive, too. I like how you chose to write Ruto's story, telling things from her perspective. It seems to have given the Ocarina of Time a whole new dimension for me. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I like this story. There's not much Ruto out there. I like the "behind the scenes" take on what happened. It's always interesting to hear more than one side of a story. To be honest, I also thought your view on Ruto was pretty realistic. She was definately selfish as a child but I thought she matured a lot when she appeared in the temple.

Nicely done! I loved it, the details were wonderfully put. Keep it up, your work tells me that you're a very talented writer.

Quin