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dimonyo-anghel 4/30/05 . chapter 8
i love it! poor laguna in the beginning though!
Verlerious 9/4/04 . chapter 8
*blinks* I gotta say the threesome was interesting. I like this story alot as well as the one before it. I actually like how the three of them were brought together. After reading this I'm actually craving seeing the three of them together more. Who knew they were so good with kids.
Strude 12/23/03 . chapter 5
*snikers covering mouth before saying* ASH CRAP *Starts to giggle agian* I love this chap too... I love your writing *smiles* Do continue the good work.
Strude 12/23/03 . chapter 4
*Pissing self laughing* THIS IS THE FUNNYEST CHAPTER YET... i know Funnyest isn't a word but HELL with it... i lvoe this chapter...
Strude 12/23/03 . chapter 3
Very nice very nice... *Looking over chapter* I think the pool setting was very nice *smiles* I want to be in a pool. but it's like -50 Degrees out so yeha *smiles* living in Canada it's great.. oop's raving... Lovin it'
Strude 12/23/03 . chapter 2
*Giggles Dancing around* WAH I LOE THIS STORY... Hmn i like your writing it's discriptive yet not overly so *smiles*
Strude 12/23/03 . chapter 1
*Smiles* I like very much... Shalt continue.
I'm LOV-IN IT (Micy-D)
ice-princess-squall 7/17/03 . chapter 7
Love this!
Love Seifer and Squall together!

Love it even more that Irvine is with them!

Write more like this!
Ashi 2/21/03 . chapter 1
The "Cupid's Trio" story arc is one of my favorites. It has humor, angst, references to Squall's endearing (at least, I think so) anal retentiveness, and bad driving on Seifer's part. And 's just perfectly Irvine.
The developing relationship between Seifer and Squall is always entertaining, as is all the bickering in between; the "Sandwich Nazi" incident sticks out Veddy makes for a great (and cute!) plot twist.

Your writing style makes it all fun to read; it's light and easy, and doesn't drag or distract from the story.
Anyway, I loved every minute of it, and enjoyed seeing the three together-with the addition of a toddler and Laguna, in this addition. Who knew Seifer would be the paternal type?
Excellent work! You'll be on my favorites list.

Ashi
Lady Yuskreven 11/8/02 . chapter 8
oh that's a really great story! Very very very funny! i like the way you make them act, and Wasabi was hilarious! _*two thumbs up!(and more if i could!*_
Lady Y
sora 11/4/02 . chapter 1
WHAT THE F ARE U THINKING? SEIFER ISN'T GAY! U SICK PERVERT! AHHHHH! *BANGING HEAD AGAISNT WALL* AHHH!
Bedia 2/21/02 . chapter 8
Wow...actually, this story is one of the best Final Fantasy stories I've ever read since the writing was so good. The plot was simple yet heart-warming and I can't count how many times it made me laugh.

Usually, the three way relationship stories prove lacking and pointless, but this one really shined.

Keep this up!
Ponder 2/3/02 . chapter 8
This is such a cute story! I loved it! I have never seen someone write Squall, Seifer, and Ivrine together at a pair. I really liked because they are my fave three.
whitebearwrites 12/27/01 . chapter 8
This was a good story, I now have to go read the other stories in the series. *grin* Can't wait for the next story in this series.
DemonRyu nsi 12/21/01 . chapter 5
HAHA! I love that so goth line, that's killer. And oysh, the old couple... -_ Poor Squall. Interesting, him being color blind... heh, Irvine's hat.. I've seen people wear those over a cowboy hat (very scary)... I love the whole Trio line! (is reviewing the middle, but will finish)
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