This not good the Legion will arise.

Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!

These updates, I consider to be one of the months highlights. It is like a real comic update (even without the comic), and one that I love. Can't wait to read the next one, the only bad thing is that it will be next month. :D

Epidot

Thanks for answering my questions. It means a lot. I wish you continued success on you story and I will be following it as you update. As always take care.

For all intents and purposes, Mary Jane and Peter are pretty much equal in terms of strength and agility. Neither one really has an advantage over the other.

In terms of powers, Mary Jane has a spider-sense, but hers is different than Peter's. Peter's acts as a danger sense the way it does in the comics, but Mary Jane's functions more as a biological spider-tracer. In the original comics, Spider-Woman emanated pheromones that made men like her and women hate her. In this version, Mary Jane's pheromones allow her to track anyone she marks with them, and also alert her when that person is in danger or is otherwise in a situation that's of interest to her. It doesn't alert her to danger, though.

While Mary Jane has organic webbing, she lacks Peter's versatility with it. Peter can use his chemistry skills to make different types of webbing that he can use in different situations. Sometimes he might need a really thick, inflexible webbing, other times he might need one that conducts electricity, etc.

Mary Jane will never run out of webbing, but she's stuck with what she's got. She can't adapt her webbing the way Peter can, because she's not a scientist and doesn't know enough about chemistry to do it.

This is a great story so far! I have a few questions though. Is Mary Jane stronger then Peter in this version and if so by how much? I do know she has organic webbing and venom energy blasts I believe. Does she have any other powers that Peter doesn't have or more advanced like spider-sense or increased agility? Looking forward to your answers. Take care.

This is a great story so far! I have a few questions though. Is Mary Jane stronger then Peter in this version and if so by how much? I do know she has organic webbing and venom energy blasts I believe. Does she have any other powers that Peter doesn't have or more advanced like spider-sense or increased agility? Looking forward to your answers. Take care.

Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.

Ah, the rogues gallery dilemma. The unfortunate fact that if a super criminal you stopped the first time becomes obsessed with the super hero and the hero begins to question whether the actions of the villain is his/her fault.

A hero problem well inserted into the story. This Randy/Mary Jane relationship seems to be well and I liked how Peter came in and talked about the superhero life as casually as highschool life, since they are in highschool anyway.

A good chapter, though I'm wondering if this new relationship MJ's got will be permanent. I hope it's not, cause I just can't picture MJ with Randy.

Wow, what a reveal. You are an excellent writer, man.

Enemies are coming around the corner!

I just read the entire story up to chapter 40 and I have to say... Wow, absolutely fan $&%#!tastic.

MJ/Spider Woman and the other villains of SW line with the canon nicely, yet at the same time the changes you've made differing from the canon fit in as well. I partically like the Spider-woman and Spider-man team ups and concersations, some are emotionally well written, some hold irony.

Small question, will MJ get any closer to Peter Parker? And I don't mean as Heroes but as friends.

I cannot wait for the next chapter. Nice job as always. Be sure to check out the Nightwalker and review. A fair critique is an author's best friend!

Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.

Another engaging chapter Mr. Milne!