Torterra
Infernape

Pikachu

torterra

infernape

pikachu

I had a conversation with a particulary... odd... chat bot. It kept giving me hints it wanted to rape me in the boot of a mini cooper... O.o?

Great chapter Paul. Has one guess on who the brunette was. I can't wait to see the strategy Ash uses this time.

kk let me figure this out

Pikachu
Infernape
hmm thrid choice I thought it was torterra but there isn't another T XD, um..

i think you should split it, 15 pages is an awful lot for a chapter... so yh go 4 it

That's really great dear! Dawn's pregnant. Stupid Team Rocket and their stupid lack of common sense.

Heather

Let's see... The third puzzle is Pikachu for sure. But that's all I can really solve for now...

Infernape, Pikachu and Ihave no idea what the other one is. Can't be Buizel.

LOL

lemme guess...

Infernape, Pikachu, and Torterra?

Ahahahahahah! This is funny, yet another side of Dawn exposed
BrUtAl Dawn! Roar!)

Heh. Dawn has anger problems. But Brock really does deserve it.

funny, hahahahahahaah, really funny, i really don't expected the end hahahahhaaha ...
good job! [thumbs up]

This is completely different that any other fic I've read... really interesting, actually, in both positive and negative ways.

Since previous reviewers have already expressed their positive views (ending shock, comedic), I'm going to provide a very simple feedback for improvement: although the dialogue was interesting, some points were a little confusing. If you were to expand it; things would clear up. Chronologically, if you included the entire conversation, things like “You just said your favorite Pokémon is Pikachu, and then you said it’s Eevee.” would make more sense.
But anyway, thanks for a great read.)

Well that was interesting... Um.. Yeah