Yeah OK Gabumon's Agumon's twin brother, whatever! I don't think so

As much as I like the exploration of Gabumon's backstory and the way it is written in first person, I think this story is really disrespectful of canon. The ideas and writing style are good, but I can't see this working within the 01 continuity.

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True way to show off the crest of friendship. COuld use some actions, and some quotes.. but.. I was able to follow it.

Wow, great! It's always interesting to see how others percieve Gabumon's fur.
And it's really great that you touched on how similar Gabu Agu are to Matt and Tai. Great angle-haven't seen it before

That is great, I always wonder why two mega digimon, MetalGarurumon always are WarGreymon shadow, I hate it when that happen. I enjoy writing fic on MetalGarurumon beat the crap out of WarGreymon, I made MetalGarurumon digivolve into the next unknown level and beat the crap out of WarGreymon, I love doing that. Die, WarGreymon Die.

Wow. That was really good. Very original.

_ How cute

It's a nice fic. Just one thing. The fur coat on him is a Garurumons. Aside from that, it's good.

good story... like the narration...)

I really like the style that was written in! Interresting explanation as well