I'm the review fairy, come to review your stories because you said you weren't well-known on DN!
I LOVE this. Seriously. It's kind of angstful, but at the same time it's almost endearing. The concept is really sad, but I honestly don't think it was OOC at all. I can see Marti reacting like this in this situation, so great job! :D

Not quite what I was expecting from the synopsis but I liked it all the same. Nice job.

Not something I'd go for most of the time, But I like it, well done. Thank You. I't cool to see older Marti POV.

well, i think it's really sweet. i love the ending and how chloe had derek's eyes. that was really special. i also like the agnst marti was suffering through at the begining. You did an excellent job. If this "isn't your best work" I'd like to see what your best work is like. This was great! Keep up the good work!

LOVED IT!