 JacksHyde 2008-11-14 . chapter 1oh my god, this was awesome! i love how you took story telling, mixed with hyde's inner thoughts and poetry and combined them all together. i don't remember how elton john's song tiny dancer goes exactly, i'm not sure that if i've listened to it in its entirety, but i truly enjoyed how you incorporated the lyrics into this story. which would you say inspired you more, the song its self or hyde's character and your interpretation of his thoughts on that aftermath that was Sam? either i give your much kudos, this is very well written. i look forward to reading more from you in the future, keep up the great work =) |