 musicfreak16 2008-11-15 . chapter 1That was REALLY good angst. I think it should stay a one-shot, and I haven't seen any or many Kratos being emotional over Anna. n.n That was good! |
 Saori Morinozuka 2008-11-15 . chapter 1omg, no!
This is so sad a am going to cry, i am crying...
damn, this is so well written, and i love the story. Kratos is my fave ToS character, and this story did him justice. Keep writing, because you're so good at it!!
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 Cataclysmic Eclipse 2008-11-14 . chapter 1It was awesome! But you knew that already. And you finally posted it, great job. More details...later. |
 RoyalFanatic 2008-11-14 . chapter 1Very heartwarming, I like! If you could make a story of this, please do! I'll keep an eye out! ^^
Hm...I don't know what else to say. There don't appear to be any noticible errors, the flow and tone are quite nice, and it's straight to the point. A very nice read.
Good job, and I do hope you'll continue! If not, then please keep up the good work anyway! ^_^ |
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