First of all: An amazing story but
Secondly: Much to many brackets.
They made it hard for me to follow the storyline at some times since I had to re-read some sentences 2-3 times, since I simply did not remember the beginning when I reached the end.

But still you did an awesome job at this fanfiction, the way their behavior changed was described perfectly. I really liked it ^-^

good job, but maybe you should try not to use this many brackets next time.
just as advice

Wow... I really don't know what to say.

That was GORGEOUS. I loved the way the last part was written from Russia's point of view. The intense emotion you put into it was nothing short of fabulous. *is very dazed*

Hoping inspiration finds you well,
Ember

Woah! I loved it! The writing is amazing, and while I don't particularly agree with all the aspects of Russia/America, I was blown away!

The angst! The jealousy! The coldness! Ahaha!

*faves, eyes swim*

*clap clap* I loved it! Truly amazing writing. Russia/America doesn't got enough love! Fantastic fanfic, I really must say.

Wow, the raw feeling and tension in this is absolutely wonderful ~
Argh, because of Hetalia and all these fanarts/fanfictions about America/Russia and the Cold War, I've been really needing to research more.

... oh, and that last line is so wonderful ~

*shivers*
O! This was lovely!
Please add more to it! Or just write more R/A! It's my favorite (along with UK/US)!

Cheers!

*whistles* Wow, that's amazing. Love how you've got the set-up of Russia and America always clashing, and Russia's terrible jealousy. *favs!*

Heh, great job on this fan fic. Short but sweet. :)

~Tanya Adams 64

Wow.
That's... just... amazing.

I love it.

This pairing totally needs more love.
As does the fandom as a whole.

But, yeah, great oneshot.
I loved how you wrote the interactions.