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SheherazadeSohma
2008-11-18 . chapter 1
Oh my god, that was amazing. I never thought about the possibility that Yuuko slipped the Book of Clow into their house. And I love how you portrayed her and Clow, they're such a tragic couple. My favorite part of this, though, has to be how you slipped Sakura's invincible spell into the last line. Bravo!
Ahria
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
This was beautiful.
Cerbi-Hamano
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
It's a wonderful story. I like how you've managed to piece certain events together, like Yukito's appearance into Sakura's family, and a hint of how Yuuko became an alcoholic. What I especially like is that you used Sakura's catchphrase, "Zettai daijoubu dayo." That was a nice touch. Great story, faving this.
ERDG-Fiji
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
This was a cute oneshot. It felt kind of strange to see thing through Yuuko's emotional eyes. A different perspective, I liked it.
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