This is an amazing write! I love the way you play Cloud. You do a great job. (He is probably one of the hardest characters to write.) This story has been great. I hope that it will continue. Its hard to find a good Cloud/Tifa fic that is sweet yet not stupid. Please keep this going. I cant wait to read more.
Keep up the great work.
-Snyder55

O.M.G Love it XD please please write more, please!1, i love this it's so well written and i would love to read more

Ashi Ai, you left this at a strange place. I think it's about wrapped up, but I also think you had at least one more chapter you wanted to do. Yet, you left this very fine story unfinished. It's 9 months later--is there a wrap up left in you? It would be nice...unfinished stories are the risks we take as readers, but I understand that life gets in the way of fanfiction writers sometimes...or the Muse disappears... or...this was a good story. It just needs a "finis" mc

I really like the way you write. The dialogue is realistic, the writing seems almost alive, and the character development is simply superb. excellent writing.

Happy New Year!
Great chapter, update asap! Even if it's not a big ol' dramatic cliffhanger, it still leaves me hanging on wondering what's next. As usual, keep up the good work ^^

I just adore how cute this story is, and how believable also, each chapter is such a thrill and doesn't disappoint the reader, keep updating, i'll be looking forward to reading more.

oh he was so close to telling her! lol. kids have the darndest timing. oh well. I loved this chapter :) very sweet

a cliffy! no come on, TIFA NEEDS TO KNOW NE!

cool chpter...update soon!

Aw so sweet as always :) Marlene has such a horrible sense of timing ;) In a moment like this she wants a cookie!
Happy New Year to you too and update soon :)

Aw,I love! Great cliffhanger~

That was a great update :) Cloud seems to be tongue-tied. hmm... Cant wait for the next chapter. Happy New Year!

I just found this story and let me say, $#!+ way to nail the characters perfectly, i just love the way this story is shaping up, and i don't think you're losing your touch, this has your name written all over it and its great, keep writing.

I like the little conversation he had with zack, it shows that his still a important part of cloud's life that didn't leave him. cloud still considers him a important friend.

I'm so happy you have a new story up! I love your Cloud/Tifa stories! this was really great, can't wait to read more!