This was almost painful to read at times, however I still found myself laughing occasionally.

I've become a fan of your fanfictions.
You right interesting stories.
It's fun to read.

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-Newy

The only whoops I noticed in your story, was that the three lost Zentradi are named Bron, Rico, and Konda, according to the Jack McKinney novelizations of the Robotech series. I'm guessing that you spelled their names phonetically.

There's one scene where I know my suggestion wouldn't drop in seamlessly but I really do think having something added could help. Here's what I would have had there. Lisa really didn't know exactly what she was saying she understood after all.

Excerpt

Lisa smacked Ranma in the side of the head, causing him to jerk violently. “How Saotome? How was that different? Now straighten up and move on with your life. After all, that’s what I did.”

/ New / Ranma still not fully collected looks at Lisa and in a voice starting out clearly avoiding emotion he replies "Ya really wana know what's different? Did Karl end up worse than just sold off to someone both you and he hated? Someone who stalked and attacked you and him every day for over a year? Someone who is known by everyone to be insane but" sniffling he continues with tears flowing again. "But her father did that to her anyway all for money." \ New \

Ranma looked up at Lisa, surprised. “Thanks commander...Lisa, I needed that.”

End Excerpt

I know it changes it to a more Cathartic moment but well Lisa hasn't really been in on the Nerima stories and she couldn't know what exactly the situation really was. I think they both need that little bit. But you might want to add to Lisa's reactions if this did get slipped in.

I know you aren't going to change it. But I like the rest of this fic enough that I have read it more than once and just can't avoid making a comment on this.

If Earth and Pluto were at the closest points possible based on their orbits lengths (And the closest points do not really line up this way) But if they were to line up as closely as possible then for the SDF-1 to get back to earth in a year they had to average a minimum speed of 136km/s (kilometers per second) rounding up the decimal. But they didn't get to stay at that speed they stopped a few times and didn't exactly get to leave the instant they got to the edge of the system either.

The point is even at that slowest possible speed the moon is only about 50min from Earth when measuring from Death Valley to the highest point of the Lunar orbit.

Why did you have it stated that it would be multiple days to get to earth? Are they having to do de-orbit maneuvers like the Space Shuttle going to and from ISS? Because between that being a slower more energy conservative vehicle and an entirely different form of space vessel entirely it still doesn't add up.

Just had to get that out of my system. I really do like the story as it is. Even with all the silly lame bits that you probably groan over when you see them. What can I say it's fun.

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well i liked it, liked the original too. ciao

great I though this story died a long time ago but I finally saw the last chapter + a teaser for the next arc. btw good job. you must notice that after you released this story allot of others started posting theirs again. (you got kicked to the second page in under 4 days which is a pretty good post rate for ranma fics these days.)

IT was good the original time you posted it and even better now that you posted a refined version of the story a continuation would only make it better still.

Keep up the good work.

Awesome is in the eye of the beholder. This fic is awesome. Many who have beheld it must agree to send you so many PMs. It is sad that you who have wrote the awesome into this story believe it to be poor quality.

Great chapter with an interesting twist at the end...

Finaaly got back on , and glad to see more of this here, and was fun to see how things are going for the gang here and will be curious as to what all will happen with the plan that Ben has come up with.

still one of my favorite Ranma stories... Thank you for the afterward...

You say this is a bad fic, I disagree. The story is a good one. I have read it several time and have a copy on my handheld computer for re-reading.

Yes you have spelling mistakes, so what, everyone does.

I'm sure you have grammar mistakes too but even though english is my native language I do not understand the grammar of it. So you get a pass from me.

Plot. This is a fanfic, you can make the plot anything you want!

Macross details, I saw some of Robotech back in the 70s so as long as you did not call the reflex cannon a phaser I'm ok with it.

I completely missed that you left Claudia out, but the story worked without her.

Akane and Kuno deserve each other. She is too violent for any real relationship.

You are a very good writer. Better than you give yourself credit for, you completed the fic.

There are too many unfinished fics out there, one is mine.

Write and post with all the errors, get it finished, any reader worth listening too will take a finished story with errors over an unfinished but otherwise "perfect" story.

Keep up the good work. Thanks.

Wow! It's been so long since I read this (before you took it down) that I'd forgotten my "cameo" in chapter 11. :) I'm glad you put it back up. It may be a bit rough in places, but it's still a damn fine story.

i really enjoyed this story