|Reviews for Sinch In Time|
| itasakufangirl 5/25/13 . chapter 68
i honestly am in love with sinch in time kakasaku are just too cute together! i totally heart your fanfic! 3 3
| venus hawthorne 5/22/13 . chapter 68
This story is like the ultimate... kakasaku adventure/romance/humor/fluff story in a complete package. Every single time I read this I just love it more and more; this is incredibly underrated and neeeds more compliments.
The story felt very realistic, and after i finished (for the nth time), i kept remembering this plot as the canon (ha, it was just too good). I know some people may frown upon the kakasaku pairing but I felt this story explained the characters well and developed their relationship in a logical way. I like that there was an actual plot and destination, and that it wasn't just romantic fluff (though it is enjoyable occasionally).
Ironically, Sinch in Time reaaaally made me love sasusaku, though that's not the main pairing. I've tried to look for sasusaku fics after reading this, but I haven't found any where I really enjoyed reading about Sasuke. Most seem to portray him as a cocky and arrogant millionaire... which I absolutely despise reading (even though it practically is as canon as possible).
I love reading your kakasaku fics, but I'm really also hoping for a future sasusaku fic from you! One where sasuke is very similar to his personality from this story :) Thanks for sharing!
| emilyL0305 5/18/13 . chapter 68
You are amazing. I was kind of skeptical, but I was bored on my bus one morning, and I decided to give it a shot. I'm so glad I did because I really liked it! Keep on writing!
| Guest 4/17/13 . chapter 3
The whole Shikamaru determining that the hole was definitely a worm hole time portal was a bit unrealistic. I don't know, there is just something about this story where all of the characters feel a bit off.
| Chrismazing 4/16/13 . chapter 1
I thought it was kinda odd how you made it seem like Sakura had no feelings for Sasuke - almost out of the blue and how despite not seeing her sensei for 6 years, is starting to develop an attraction for him. I'll keep reading though because I am starved for an amazing KakaSaku and I'm hoping you'll stave off that hunger!
| Sibrael 3/29/13 . chapter 68
Great ending with Sasuke!
| rogue-angel82 3/26/13 . chapter 1
just reread this lol, still enjoyed it just as much and still feeling exhausted from the journey lol. I hope that you write a sequel for this in story or at least in one-shot sometime about the future. that last scene just begs to be followed up, it reminds me of the finally scene out of back to the future lol.
| YafahShira 3/18/13 . chapter 68
Sequel? Wedding night? Anything?
| impromptumelody95 3/11/13 . chapter 68
Nice ending although that makes me really curious as to how hat would have played out. This story was epic you made Kakashi so human and sympathisable. You wrote so well I am envious.
| impromptumelody95 3/10/13 . chapter 9
Awww Kakashi is so cute!
| KakashiXxXRoseXxXVegeta 3/9/13 . chapter 68
That was simply amazing. I think I spent an hour telling my friend about this story and the plot a few days ago, I was about 3/4 through this story. I was addicted to this. I laughed so much in certain scenes. I even cried when Kakashi and Minato made up! I really don't get that emotional in a story! I would've died if someone walked in on my and saw me crying at a Naruto Fanfiction. My mother and sister have already caught me crying when I watched Asume die! Do you know how embarrassing that is! I'm jealous of Sakura... That bitch... Taking my Kakashi away from me...
I really have no complaints. I enjoyed it all. Besides spelling/grammar errors here and there it was good in that area. Lets be seriously though, it's not like you are trying to produce a novel worldwide, it's a story on the Internet(no offense). There is bound to be errors so I wish people would shut the hel lup about spelling errors. I was probably a little confused in some places towards the beginning, but nothing a little rereading couldn't solve. I thought the lyrics in the beginning if the chapters suite the chapter well. They probably would've annoyed me for fooling me about how long the chapter truly was but I didn't have to wait for you to update so it wasn't bad. I would mention more but Im drawing blanks...
I thoroughly enjoyed this though. It's something I wouldn't mind reading over a few times. Great job :D now I gotta find a new story...
| Perfect Beauty 3/4/13 . chapter 68
This story is simply fantastic.
| Rory O'Kane 3/2/13 . chapter 68
• Interesting plot
• Lively, fleshed-out characters
• Unique – different from other Naruto time travel stories, especially in how the new present is given as much attention as the new past
• There are a huge amount of spelling errors – perhaps five mistakes per chapter, on average
• The author sometimes takes too much time in describing the scene, in song lyrics, or in flashbacks, making me think “get on with the story already”
• It’s annoying that the three trainers, the techniques they teach, and the time frame they have to teach them in are never explained – they are just deus ex machina. Eon is kind of the same, but he’s more forgiveable, as he has more background and characterization.
• Sakura’s story in the second half is interesting, but I would have also liked a bit more description of Sasuke and Naruto reaping the benefits of their changes, before we dove too deep into Sakura’s story, so I would feel more triumphant and satisfied about Team Seven’s victory in the first half.
| Guest 3/1/13 . chapter 48
That was so emotional, I cried at the end, lovely story! Cant wait till i get to the end :D
| paranaoblue 2/24/13 . chapter 68
So I'm going to be honest that I started reading this story much earlier and was completely turned off by what you changed in their history. Obito surviving, the third Hokage taking the place of the fourth so he could live on, Itachi not killing off the Uchiha clan. It really bothered me and I just stopped reading. I think I couldn’t stand that aspect of it being every fangirl's dream of trying to make things “right.” But then I read another story from you and really liked it. Afterwards, I really thought about it and came to the conclusion that hey, this is fanfic here. We're allowed to take creative liberties here and there. If we only wrote Canon, there would be no story to tell, especially with pairings such as this. So after I got over that and really started to read this story for what it was, I enjoyed it. I just wanted to write out that whole earlier bit of the story feeling wrong to me in a way to I guess constructively letting you know my gut reaction to what you were doing. I don't know if that helps you at all, and I’m truly sorry if it doesn’t because then I just wasted your time making you read that.
Your angst is superb. I've always preferred angst to fluff and you do it very well. It's dramatic and deep and really makes you feel things. The things you made me feel when I read the very last angst confrontation of Kakashi chasing after Sakura is what I try to get others to feel when I write my own stories so I think you did a very good job indeed. Once again, the presence of typos took away from the story, but it was still a great read. And I really liked your dialogue in some places. Good dialogue provides for maximum impact and you really hit it in certain instances. There were a lot of good things in here. The book of letters was so cute; both the one Kakashi’s parents wrote to each other and the one he wrote to Sakura when she was gone. I simply adored the idea that Kakashi became the go-to guy for the runts of litters and that’s where his ninken came from. I think the ‘second’ end with Eon and Sasuke.
I sometimes struggled with your perception of voice in certain characters, but on the flip side, Obito felt very real to me. Even though some of the characters voices didn’t always agree with me, the overall impact of their words usually did. I hope my tone of reviewing doesn't put you off. I really think you're a good writer and I'm not in any high position to tell you good and bad things, but these are just my personal opinions. I realize I can sound snobbish without meaning to. I hope I didn’t come across that way. I mean, I'm in the process of writing my own story but I'm nowhere near being someone with a level high enough to give tips or writing advice. It's mostly written as a reader’s reaction to a writer and their story. I used to not write very many reviews in the past because of the feeling I get of ‘who am I to say or suggest this when I have nothing to show for myself?’ but then I figured that's really what reviews are for, right? To express appreciation, give suggestions for improvement, and generally share their thoughts with the writer. So that’s what I did here. As a final note, I wanted to thank you for writing this story because like I said earlier, it was a pleasure to read.