|Reviews for Not What You Thought|
| Benjamin Rockaway 9/6/10 . chapter 7
There wasn't really any meaning behing the child abuse/rape. I felt like it wasn't going anywhere and was just senseless...
| Guest 2/13/09 . chapter 3
One thing, the dates are wrong. They'd have to be 1980s/1990s, depending on if we're talking high school or primary school. I'm overlooking the fact this is an AU fic, since that's what it is. I'm not going to complain about how wrong it is based on the series... Mainly because it is AU. Alternate Universe fics get that leeway.
Anyway. Yeah, interesting so far, though I generally don't do AU, I'm not minding this one. Just gotta fix the dates. You have 2008 on it, which would mean current to the series, or relatively so. My suggestion is go with 1986-1989, those seem to be the usual ones for the series. MAYBE early 90s, at latest. But not much later, or it would spoil the mental image I have of a bloody lil Shawn. Lol. I'm twisted, yeah. But a beaten up Shawn is so much fun. (now onto finishing the fic. Just wanted to get that in there first)
| Inumaru12 11/16/08 . chapter 7
aww how sad. poor Shawn. it was pretty good though,i liked the idea.