neat!
I was mildly confused who the fishes are & who the birds are at times..
but liked it! :)

I can't believe I haven't already reviewed this. It was outstanding--amazing. I loved all of your symbolism and metaphors so much. This story has stuck with me. I'd be delighted if you wrote more. You're very talented.

Thought I should let you know I really enjoyed reading this; it was poetic and simple, but in the most flattering of ways.

i agree with ub

this is crap

ub is a little b*tch who's too afraid to leave negative comments unless he/she isn't logged in. What a waste of space. THAT being said, I really enjoyed reading this fic of yours (as I always do). Thanks for sharing. :)

what the heck is this crap?

aw, so beautiful, loved it.
i loved the elle being afraid of the aquarium! rofl.
and, i get the birds = humans, fish = heroes thing. i didn't get them mixed up, did i? i hope not. i loved this.

jaymie.