Haha, this made me laugh for some reason. I mean it was way too easy to imagine them doing that. Like these were the parts that Hino-sensei left out. XD Another great story. ^~^

Very sensory. I enjoyed this take on the Kaname x Yuuki relationship. Hope you write more of this pairing!

That is not a lemon. and it's NOT a one-shot.
It's not even a lime '^^
A lemon is intrecorse.
Eal in the cave you know?

My f asket me to tell you

Aw... Poor Yuuki! And Kaname too! >o<

--Still Doll Yuuki

That was perfect. The concept of them simultaneously masturbating while in different locations is very much an original idea. In all my years of reading fanfiction, I've never read something like this. You're brilliant!

this is good. hard to find good sex scenes. thought they're by themselves, its still one of the hottest things I've read in a while. its really romantic too. i love that kind of pain. it is really good. although its unlikely for a woman to "play" in a bath tub filled with water. good way to get an infection, it'd hurt later. but having running water to muffle her moans is a very good idea. other than that, the only thing i would change is how you said, "doing it" that's something someone really young would say. i think touching or pleasuring herself would be better than doing it. but this is very good. keep writing:)

You make masturbating sound like a work of art^^ hehe. Everthing was in such fine details and so sensual it makes me hot!:D

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You always manage to amaze me, you know? I loved the ending! And the beginning! Okay... I loved evrything! I have a thing for Kaname fulfilling his 'lonely pleasure' (Perfect name, by the way!) so this was an instant fave.

Dude u have to write more I loved the whole same time different place thing u had going.If I didnt know better u have a talent for the impossible.

So far I've only seen season one of the anime, but I think Kaname is smokin! And Zero's pretty bodacious too. Yuuki, though, is hotter than both.
Interesting take. I liked the ending a lot. It was deep...Made people think.

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I blushed... this was...wonderful? not the right word, not enough...
write something like this again, will you? please!

I loved this! O.o It's such a weird thought, tho! Very interesting concept to use for a fan fic... 8D Bravo!

Aw, this was sweet, lovely, hot and sad all at the same time. It's so cute that they were both doing the same thing, at the same time, thinking of each other. That they don't realize how they both hold the same thoughts, feelings and fears.

The title of this fic was very apt and I like the way you did it. LOL and I agree, now they just need to do it together instead of apart! ;D

Lovely writing, as always!!

I really await for the direct lemony stuff. T_T
they both got way to depressed.
I dont write, thus I dont know how to tips you to improve. but I love this fanfic. ^__^

Loolz this is really good, i loved it. Good point you made at the end thought, interesting xD Good job xx