 Technician Fan 2009-02-17 . chapter 1 Good story. But, it's not Zelanka, it's Zelenka. Just for a little reminder thingy and for future cases. You should write more Amelia and Ronon. It works out quite well. Good luck, dude! |
 journeyman07 2009-01-18 . chapter 1Really like this...how you deal with Amelia's perceptive POV and how she moves to losing her invisibility to Ronon. Thoughtful and heartwarming piece - thanks x |
 renisanz 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Yay! I'm so glad I found this fic, as I was specifically searching for Ronon/Amelia fic that I may have missed (thinking of writing my own). I liked how you got into Amelia's head, showing her when she first arrived on Atlantis to be schooled by Chuck, how the gate techs stay in the background but know all the dirt that goes down. Loved the open ending especially. Thanks for this. :) |
 RedSharkBait 2008-12-25 . chapter 1Good job. I want to read more...I've been thinking about a Ronon/Banks pairing ever since I saw "The Prodigal." Thanks a lot. |
 Agrabah's Princess 2008-12-12 . chapter 1AH! Yes! Finally! A Ronon/Amelia fic! I've been searching for one. You have to make more, please?! :D |
 whoa dream big 2008-12-08 . chapter 1I was JUST thinking that this might be a totally interesting coupling. As hardcore of a Ronon/Keller fan I am, I wouldn't mind reading more Ronon/Amelia! ;) |
 roseyangel 2008-11-27 . chapter 1Very cute. I love this pairing, and I can't wait to see more stories like this. |
 krissie678 2008-11-26 . chapter 1Great story. You should definitely write more. |
 Brittany 2008-11-19 . chapter 1 thank you for the wonderful short. I do hope you write more of this pair. I'm very happy they went this way, though I was pleased with the attention Ronon was getting from Keller. However if she wants to go with McKay so be it. ( :thinks she's a fool: )
So thank you again for great short and feeding my little want of more from this pair. |
 theicemenace 2008-11-16 . chapter 1I like it. They would make a great couple. I would believe Ronon and Amelia before I would believe Ronon and Jennifer. Too bad you won't be writing any more for them. |
 LadyReeana 2008-11-16 . chapter 1Yay! We have a R/A fic! Thank you! Nicely done too :-). |
 Doormouse 2008-11-16 . chapter 1You are my new hero. No, really. I adore Banks, for her only being in about...ten minutes of the show all toll. :) But I've always got a soft-spot for the side-characters.
Imagine my surprise when I stumbled in here and the first story I saw had her in it! Seriously, I can't stop smiling. I'm just excited other people are paying her mind. Furthermore, you write her really well...
Which, admittedly is odd to say when there isn't much characterization to go off of, but I mean, that you write her very similar to how I imagine her to be. ^_^
It would certainly be neat to see more of her from you, but even if not you've given me hope that other people noticed her too and maybe we'll get to see more of her in the show. See? New hero. :) |
 tripwatcher2 2008-11-15 . chapter 1Great job on Amelia's POV! I've been thinking about doing a story on them ever since seeing their scenes together! There is tremendous possibility there!! |
 rhaddict 2008-11-15 . chapter 1I really liked that. Just observations, but something a little more too. I thought the same thing after 'The Prodigal' and I remembered the picture posted for 'Enemy at the Gate'. I needed to figure out who was beside Ronon in that picture because she didn't look real familiar but she was beside Ronon. Amelia seems ok, but I still would rather have Ronon with Keller. Great one shot. |