its not crap at all its very good. please give us some more chapters

i likes it.
can i has some more?

Wow that was weird. Okay, a few moments of grammar deserting your mind...and Place is capitalized in Grimmauld Place, but that's okay.
Yes I want you to write more...
If only because I don't really know what's going on here. but that's all right.

WE rock...oh yeah...