Wow, I think we've all had days like that, or will someday in our futures.

I was very impressed with the way that you kept the intergity of Iolas and Gabrielle's character. In Fanfic, it's sometimes very easy to revert to something other than type, but that didn't happen here.

A very well played out approach to a complex situation that would make any man or woman uncomfortable, and a clever way of resolving the issue.

I hope to see more of your stuff in the future. Keep up the good work and thanks!)

I just wanted to say thanks for writing a great Iolaus/ Gabrielle fic! They are too few and far between. You captured the characters very well and it was a riot. PLEASE write more for these two- they're the best!

Funny, romantic, touching, and well-written, with terrific dialogue and a great, amusing twist at the end. Bravo! (My only criticism is the use of the phrase "the golden hunter" to refer to Iolaus it's one of those fanfic cliches that I personally think should be avoided, rather like "raven-haired warrioress." But that's a minor quibble.) I've always liked the Gab/Iolaus dynamic and this is one of the most enjoyable G/I stories I've read.

That was really cute! I couldn't help but laugh along. This has got to be an original story!

*rolls around laughing* I loved it!